Unfortunately, it looks like I will be out a bit longer. I apologize in advance for my absence, but the doctor will not allow me to return to school until this virus runs its course. In the meantime, I have decided to share with you a story that I wrote which will serve as a model for your assignment tomorrow. Let me know what you think!
Joshier and Sabrina were two of the
most famous archaeologists to ever
explore the vast Sahara Desert; they have been credited with many glorious
discoveries. Although they don’t always
see eye-to-eye, their adulation of history
has brought them together for their most recent exploration. They came face-to-face with their most
ferocious competitors, and ancient civilization
experts, Drs. Tevin and Alivia Boston.
The Bostons have roamed the desert with valor, led by nomadic tribesmen who have guided them
with domesticated camels to many
remote sites and helped them to make myriad of significant discoveries.
According
to oral tradition, the western part
of the desert was once populated with various social classes. The upper class was made up of the elite
leaders who were treated as royalty. The
most famous were King Jake and Queen Phoebe whose sons Sal and Taylor were
highly sought-after by the ladies. The
Garls were invigorated leaders and made sure to take care of the lower
class as they were passionate about every member of their kingdom. The middle class was made up of skilled
artisans including basket-weavers, potters, and crafters among others. The poor worked hard as well and contributed
to society in other ways.
Although
the geography was harsh, its
citizens were able to survive thanks to a vast network of canals which allowed
them to irrigate their land; however
the vast desert was no place for a thriving civilization. Despite their ingenuity, the once thriving
civilization perished some time ago when they could no longer compromise. Their infrastructure was destroyed by
rioting citizens, the centralized government was over-thrown when the
nobles could no longer keep the people nourished, social classes warred
as the elite took control of the valuable resources and camaraderie
waned , written language became antiquated as people no longer had time
to keep records, and the people lost faith in their organized religion.
The
rivaling archaeological teams raced to make discoveries but each group
encountered disaster after disaster.
Wicked winds raged, violent storms flashed all around them, and food
became scarce. It appeared that all hope
was lost when a lowly intern noticed an interesting figure in the
distance. Instead of notifying the
others, intern Avery rushed off with much jubilation and discovered a
group of mummified bodies. These hominids were very old and helped to shed
some light on prehistoric
times. These Stone Age people were previously unknown and their discovery led
Avery to great heights among modern-day archeologists. Today, Avery works hand-in-hand with Zahi
Hawass one of the foremost experts in Egyptology and he has no empathy for his
former teammates. Avery and Hawass have filled
museums with a surplus of artifacts
over the years and rose to great fame as they toured the world. Unfortunately, the teams of Joshier and
Sabrina and Dr. and Dr. Boston were pushed deep into the shadows forever.